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高三短文改错解析一则

作者:蔡振全

高三短文改错解析一则

The zoo has big basket for rubbish. People can throw 1. ________

waste into them. On that Saturday afternoon there 2. ________

are usually a lot of people around the cages which 3. ________

the lovely animals are kept, and last Saturday nobody was 4. ________

there. Mr. Patties was surprised. But he was even much 5. ________

surprised to see few children around the basket near 6. ________

the tiger's cage. He quickly came up and looked over 7. ________

their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket 8. ________

and looking for food. The rat was afraid and the children 9. ________

were interested in the rat than in the tigers. 10. ________

【答案与解析

1. basket→baskets。用可数名词复数形式表示类别。2. 去掉 that。此处表示泛指。3. which前 加in或者将which 改为where。关系副词在定语从句中作状语,修饰 are kept。4. and→but 5. much→more。even修饰比较级,此处even more surprised意为"更加惊讶"。 6. few前加a或few改为some。从下文看,在垃圾箱周围站着一些孩子,所以此处表示肯定意义。 7. came→went 8. run→running。用现在分词作saw的宾语补足语,表示当时的情景"小老鼠正跑来跑去"。9. 此行无错。 10. 在interested前加more构成比较级。